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每周背诵一篇英语热点话题作文,中考稳拿高分(24)

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每周背诵一篇英语热点话题作文,中考稳拿高分(24)

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写作任务

Describing an experience of being home alone

英语课上,某班同学分享各自独自在家的经历,假如你是该班同学,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文,讲述父母出差时你第一次独自在家的经历,与大家分享。

写作要求:
1. 须包含提示中的所有内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 条理清楚,语言流畅,语句通顺,标点正确;
3. 100词左右。

思路点拨

第一步:审题

1. 找关键词:独自在家的经历
2. 确定以下几个内容
体裁:记叙文
时态:一般过去时为主
人称:第一人称
第二步:列出写作提纲
开头部分:引出主题
主体部分:描述此次经历的过程
结尾部分:谈谈自己的感受
第三步:选词组句
1. 描述经历常用的词汇
● 表示感受:excited, happy, glad, relaxed, interested, bored, angry, unhappy, sad, upset, necessary,important, difficult, easy, hard, simple, expect, hope,look forward to, enjoy, like, love, hate, can’t wait
● 表示家务:do the chores (做家务), do the dishes, do the laundry (洗熨衣物), sweep the floor, clean the windows, fold (叠) the clothes, make thebed, do the cooking / washing
2. 记叙文中常用的一些连接词
● 表示时间:when, as, while, after, before, for the first time, until, at the same time, as soon as, at first, at last, at the end of, first, then, next, after that, at that time, finally, in the end
● 表示原因:because / because of, since, as, for, for this reason, thanks to (多亏)
● 表示结果:so, so … that …, therefore, as a result
● 表示转折:but, however, still, while, to one’s surprise, to tell the truth, to be honest, in fact
● 表示让步:though, even though, although, in spite of, whatever, however, whoever
● 表示目的:in order to, so that, for this purpose, so as to
3. 提炼可能用到的句型
开头部分:
● As teenagers, we have all had the experience of being home alone.
● What do you like best or least about being home alone?
● Do you know how to enjoy being home alone?
● Can you manage / complete basic tasks like cooking or washing clothes?
● Staying home alone can be a positive (积极的) experience for us teenagers.
● I love being home alone when my parents go out.
● Being home alone helps us gain confidence and independence.
● Here I’d like to share one of my experiences of being home alone.
主体部分:
● When I was … years old, my parents were away for some days, so I had to be home alone.
● I stayed home alone for a day when my parents went to …
● Last week, my parents went to … on business, and I stayed home all by myself.
● I finished all of my homework first.
● I began to watch TV / play computer games.
● I planned to spend about three hours reading.
● I enjoyed myself listening to music all morning.
● At first, I thought I would have fun staying home alone.
● Everything wasn’t so easy as I had thought. 
● I realised it was so difficult for me to / It was really hard for me to / I didn’t know how to … 
● I had to call … for help with the …
结尾部分:
● I have learnt a lot from this experience of being home alone.
● The experience of being home alone has made a big difference to me.
● I will never forget the experience though it happened so long ago.
● All in all / In a word / To sum up, it was a really amazing / exciting / interesting / painful / pleasant /valuable experience that I will always remember.
● From the experience, I learned a valuable lesson in life: …
● The experience taught me a valuable lesson in life: …
● The failure (失败) was a good experience to me.
● I think I will never forget this experience / always remember this experience / remember this experience for ever because …
第四步:连句成篇
根据写作提纲连句成篇,力求文章内容准确生动、条理清楚。在这一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词,把所有要点、句子连接起来,使句与句之间意思连贯,结构衔接。

例文展示

Home alone

As teenagers, we have all had the experience of being home alone. Is life as easy as when your parents are around? Here I’d like to share my first experience of being home alone.
When I was 12, my parents both went to Shenzhen on business, and I had to be home all by myself for 24 hours. At first, I was a little afraid because I had never been home alone before. But soon I forgot about it because I threw myself into an interesting book. I spent the whole morning reading it. At noon, I took the food out of the fridge and heated it. Mum had cooked some dishes before she left. In order to prove that I could take good care of myself, I washed my clothes in the afternoon. In the evening, I finished my homework. At night, after watching a movie on TV, I went to bed at 10:30.
Being home alone was not as difficult as I had thought. I really felt proud of myself. This experience of being home alone has made a big difference to me. I have become more and more confident and independent.

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